如何提高托福写作(托福写作怎么提高?)

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如何提高托福写作(托福写作怎么提高?)

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托福写作怎么提高?

输出类项目口语、写作,考生要做的第一件事,就是理解官方的评分标准,即我们写出什么样的文章才能拿高分。你给的正是他想要的,你分就高。

下面以独立写作为例。独立写作评分标准有三:展开、组织、语言。

托福写作怎么提高?

首先,我们来分析development- 展开

OG中明确指出,想在development这个维度拿高分,文章必须 well-developed, using clearly appropriate explanations, exemplifications, and/or details”,也就是说文章必须提供清晰的解释、举例和细节。

以OG给出的范例为例: At the heart of any discussion regarding an issue pertaining to creating a new ho百思特网liday, it has to be borne in mind that a delicate line has to be trod when dealing with such matters. The human resources involved in such matters cannot be guaranteed regardless of all the good intentions that may be lavished. While it is true that creating a new holiday might be a viable and laudable remedy, it is transparently clear that applied wrongly such a course of a百思特网ction could be calamitous and compound the problem rather than provide a solution.(OG第4版第208页)

这个段落就“应不应该设置更多的假期”这个话题进行了讨论。字很多,大词挺唬人,但并没有实质内容。

第一句只说我们在设置假期时应该划定一条“delicate line”,但自始至终并没有告诉我们这条线是什么,并没有对自己的topic进行一个合理的解释,即缺失explanation部分。

谨记:慎用新名词、新观点;你给了我一个新词、新观点,就要解释,否则不要给。给一个点,就要画一条线;再给一个点,再画一条线。

紧跟着作者又声称:设置新假期浪费人力资源。考官被撩起,等着看为什么会浪费人力资源呢,作者却话锋一转,说设置新假期会有好处,但搞不好会也会加剧问题。这tmd不是打官腔吗?把考官撂在那了。给了点,没有画线,没有exemplification和details。

想要满足development这个评分维度,这个段落的正确打开方式应该是这样的: 先给topic sentence,说出我们应该划定一条“delicate line”,紧接着两到三句话解释一下“delicate line”的具体含义,保证explanation确实存在,然后举一个详细的例子去证明,按照这种方式去做会成功(也可以举一个详细的反例去证明没有“line”确实不行),同时满足exemplification和detail的要求。总之四步走:topic sentence + explanation + exemplification + details。

接下来,我们看评分标准的第二条

organization-组织,也就是文章是怎样安排、衔接的。同样由三方面组成:unity统一、progression连续和coherence连贯;同时避免三种现象:redundancy重复、digression跑题和unclear connections无逻辑性连接。这里重点说一下段落的无逻辑性连接。

很多考生误以为每段开头写个firstly, secondly就算逻辑性连接了,其实不然,真正的连接是靠内容推进完成的,不是简单地堆砌关联词。

我喜欢骑马。1. 骑马很帅;2. 骑马性感;3. 骑马让我看起来精神抖擞。大哥,这是3个理由还是1个理由?

托福写作怎么提高?

还是看OG范例:However, a significant advantage of living by oneself is that people develop leadership skills. Individuals that live by themselves learn to do and sustain their own decisions. On the contrary, people who live with their parents are more shy and less confident. For instance, many of the greatest world leaders are or have been people that were separated from their parents when they were kids. Another advantage of living independently is that people can fully develop their creative potential. When people is forced to difficult situations, they can surprise us with outstanding abilities and values that otherwise remained hidden. A good example are blind people, thes百思特网e person show a remarkable ability for art and music. In a similar way, when parents are absent or too away for help, individuals manage to survive and be successful. (OG 第4版第304页)

第1段说自己住有一个好处是可以培养领导力(领导自己?可疑), 第2段说自己住可以激发创造力。光看段落内部,也算解释清楚了。

但是!OG说它not well connected to each other or to the generalizations made by the writer!也就是说,这两段没有明确的逻辑联系,没有过渡,完全就是各说各的!

想要满足organization这个评分维度,我们一定要做到:1. 千万不要跑题!2. 千万不要重复!尤其是支持段的分论点不管是内容还是角度都不要重复,结尾段通过paraphrase的方式避免重复和前面一样的话!3. 一定要有过渡句!如 “ 接下来我会给出详细的解释和举例来证明我的观点 ”。可以出现在前一段结尾,或后一段开头。

最后我们来看language use- 语言运用

有效的语言运用被分为三个维度:variety&range, accuracy, domesticity。

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